There was nobody at the Galloway restaurant when I showed up, half an hour before it was supposed to open. There were certain advantages and disadvantages I presumed in owning or running a restaurant and living in attached quarters. Lorraine was indefatigable, and Tom wasn’t far behind her. I’d asked Gularte to show up but I had no idea what time he got up in the morning. The rescue out beyond Trestles had taken it out of me much more so than I would have ever thought. There was little question if I wanted to think about it, which I didn’t, that my daily workouts, as diminished as they might be, had helped save my life, but the price was still being paid. I’d slept, but fitfully, my wife waking me up constantly to see if I was still breathing, or at least so I accused her.
Gularte walked through the door. I looked behind him to make sure Mike Manning wasn’t with him. There were things I needed to talk to Gularte about that I didn’t want anyone else to hear or overhear.
Gularte pulled out a chair and sat down.
“The SCUBA equipment idea won’t work,” he said.
Lorraine eased around him as he finished and deposited a mug of black coffee in front of him.
“You guys are going diving?” she asked, making me frown.
“Not really, just thinking about it, “I replied, mildly irritated by Gularte’s potentially revealing comment, even if Lorraine and Tom had proven pretty trustworthy and dependable.
Lorraine headed toward the back of the counter. When she was out of range I whispered to Gularte, “Would you be more careful, and keep your voice down.”
“We’re not SCUBA qualified, either one of us,” Gularte said, sipping from his coffee cup, a cup I knew he wouldn’t offer to pay for, even though the Galloways kept the cost of a cup down to forty cents.
“I’ve done a bit of diving on the reefs out in Hawaii,” I offered, knowing my argument for proceeding with a dive was weak but having no other avenue for accessing the trunk of the Porsche.
“A work dive at night?” Gularte asked, “A work dive without bright lights, probably one atmosphere down, and the divers without so much as a key to that frunk, as you call it?”
“You’ve got a point,” I conceded, drinking from my own cup and wondering where to go from where we were. I’d made a number of nearly terminal mistakes on the ‘Yellow Submarine’ mission, as Gularte referred to it.
“Butch,” I suddenly said aloud, making sure Lorraine was nowhere nearby.
The woman was almost literally a sponge for any information, which worked great for helping me in my insurance sales but otherwise was something to be very carefully and consistently aware of.
“I apologize,” Gularte said, his voice barely more than a whisper, his gaze directed out toward Del Mar Avenue, which had no traffic at the early hour and only our cars parked at the curb.
I waited, not knowing what Gularte was apologizing for but not wanting to break his obviously serious train of thought and expression.
“For yesterday,” Gularte went on. “I’m not that good in the water. I took one look at that roiled mess of sea state and knew I’d be useless out there. But what I really apologize for was not even making the attempt.”
“No apology necessary,” I replied, with a small laugh. “It was automatic on my part and I’m pretty experienced in handling rough or even wild surf.”
“So I noticed,” Gularte said, starting to loosen up a bit and relax. “How do you feel?”
“I’m okay,” I lied.
My wife had bandaged me up once more, the prolonged exposure to the storm-tossed sea water and the tremendous effort of just surviving out in it having re-opened my center incision a few inches. It hadn’t bled, however, and I was thankful for that. The Saran wrap kept the bandages in place but was a bit uncomfortable as it was trapped in heat and perspiration. The SCUBA idea had been a bit hare-brained, I realized, in more ways than those mentioned by Gularte. I was in no physical shape to do any kind of underwater dive, particularly one to be made at night with little light and no key to the vehicle.
“What about Butch?” Gularte asked.
“We’ve got to have the Porsche raised and then get private access to it before insurance investigators, the police, or anyone else,” I replied. “Butch has the equipment and I think we can trust him, at least to a certain extent.”
“But not with whatever might be in that thing,” Gularte said, needlessly stating the obvious. I wasn’t at all certain that even Gularte and I wanted to know what was in that frunk.
“How in hell do we explain why we know the car’s down there?”
“Richard,” I replied, figuring out how to plan the new mission as I sat and thought about it. “We need a big sailing yacht to launch and encounter the wreck, which would allow Butch to use equipment to see what was down there and then pull the Porsche up.”
“Great,” Gularte said, with a smile and a renewed sense of enthusiasm. “Another mission, I love it, but what’s the name this time?”
I was once again struck by just how important mission names, particularly those identified with powerful and popular song lyrics, really were. I didn’t truly understand it but the Marines down in the A Shau had driven its importance deeply inside me. I thought for a few seconds, thinking about our situation and what likely had to be done to extricate us, or at least me, from it.
“The Last Farewell,” I said, looking out the window onto the dead street displayed before us.
“Whittaker,” I think that guy is called,” Gularte mused, more to himself than to me. “But that’s a song about dying but then maybe being saved at the end.”
“Like the Porsche, you mean?” I quoted the lyrics of the song just before its ending: “And should I return home safe again to England I shall watch the English mist roll through the dale…”
“So, we just have to change England to Germany?” Gularte replied like his conclusion displayed some sort of brilliance or wisdom.
“Very funny,” I replied.
In the valley I’d come out of none of the Marines down there ever voiced humor about the mission names or the lyrics they were derived from. But I wasn’t in that valley anymore, I reminded myself, staring out the window. There was nobody outside, dawn was in full evidence at the horizon with dimmed light that would shine brightly, and burning white at midday was instead a soft spreading glow that made the expectations of greater warmth and visibility something well worth waiting for.
“So, we have to bring Butch in and Richard too, who hopefully can get hold of the kind of sailboat we need, from someone who might risk damaging the keel of that expensive thing to accomplish what? I mean in their view. Obviously, Cobb knows. That will be five of us.”
“True,” I replied, wondering where he was going with his logic.
“We’re going to prison,” he finally said, not looking over at me. “Five people can’t or won’t keep a secret, especially if only two of them are at risk.”
“True,” I said after a few seconds of thought. “I mean about the five people keeping a secret. That means we both have to get the Porsche raised and grab whatever’s inside the frunk. We can likely include Butch throwing in with us. My job alone is to make sure about Richard and Cobb.”
“How are you going to do that?” Gularte asked.
“Simple, really,” I said, my mind already racing into that part of The Last Farewell. “They just have to be made to understand that they are at as much risk, or preferably more than we are.”
Gularte finished his coffee and put the cup down softly and quietly on the ceramic saucer.
“Sometimes Junior, you scare me,” he said, rising to his feet. “What do we do now?”
“We’ve got to have a visit with Butch, and then the other two,” I replied, “and we’ve got to do it right away.”
“That Cobb woman and Richard, both, they are scary too,” Gularte said, actually reaching into his Gurkha shorts pocket for some change.
He pulled his hand out empty. I wanted to smile but didn’t. It was forty cents plus a buck tip, not worth making anything out of. Gularte’s worth was way beyond that.
“The point is that we are not scary,” I replied. “And that’s a good thing.
They think they are predators and so they exude a bit of malice and threat. We are real predators and don’t give any of that away. Advantage in.”
“That’s what I mean,” Gularte murmured.
“What’s what you mean” I asked, getting a bit frustrated.
“How do you think that way?”
“What way?” I asked back, mystified. When Gularte made no effort to explain himself, I went on, “I’ll see you at your place in an hour. It’s too early for anyone to be up yet so we can only make sure we know what we’re doing.”
The door had opened to the restaurant as I’d been finishing.
“What are you doing?” Mike Manning asked, walking in and by Gularte.
Gularte stepped past him with a brief nod and then went through the door.
“How’s it going, Jimmy?” Mike said, taking Gularte’s empty chair.
Lorraine cleared Gularte’s cup and saucer quickly, replacing it with a fresh one for Mike. I hated the name Jimmy but didn’t complain. I’d hated Junior at first too but come to accommodate that down in the valley. Beach Ball and Beach Boy were merely bothersome nicknames and it counted for something that Mrs. Nixon at least recognized my existence on the planet and on the edge of her world with the Beach Boy thing. I frowned but didn’t make any comment. It was too early to get hold of either Butch or Richard so Mike’s arrival would at least burn up some time.
“So, what is it that you’re doing with him,” Mike said, taking a too-large swig of his hot coffee and almost spitting it onto his saucer. When he recovered himself, he went on. “Gularte was a good Marine, but back in the real world he’s a bit rough around the edges if you get my drift.”
I got his drift, and the accuracy of his opinion, but Gularte, being rough around the edges was exactly who I needed in my life if I was going to pull myself through the variety of situations, I’d somehow plunged into neck-deep. There was no way that I was going to share the current mission with him, however. The Last Farewell could not only be the mission’s name but actually describe my departure from normal human company or freedom. Gularte had proven himself in ‘combat’ so to speak, even accepting more responsibility than needed for not diving into the rough surf and very likely losing his life to help me. I totally understood and accepted that not just in my new reality of life (I wanted living people in it, not any more dead people), but also in my A Shau driven understanding of just how flawed we all are. Mike had also demonstrated that under real combat circumstances, but his own acceptance of that, I knew, would be a long time in coming, if ever. I’d found the tool of redemption, thanks to a hippy therapist, and Young’s survival was a part of that. The rescue was uplifting in so many ways, as it helped reinforce the fact that the times I’d run or hidden under fire, were exceptions to the fact of what my core was really made of. A patched-up core but a decent one.“
“What’s that strangely ugly cat doing?” Mike suddenly said, changing the subject entirely.
I looked out the window toward where Mike was pointing.
Bozo sat on the curb, facing us, and staring directly back at me through the big glass window.
“What the hell?” I whispered. The cat was a good three blocks from our apartment and had to have come across city streets and traffic, even though it was a bit early for much in the way of vehicular danger to be present. It was uncommon. I explained to Mike what Bozo was in my life, and then, before I could finish, the cat was gone, he turned and rushed down the sidewalk almost too fast for me to follow.
“That’s weird,” Mike remarked. “I’ve never seen a cat on this street, not since I’ve been here, and it turns out to be your cat, even weirder, and I’ve never seen a cat as strange-looking as that one. Only you.”
I sat thinking. What was in that strange cat’s mind, not only to appear in front of Galloways but to do so and then stare through the window at me? There was one explanation that made sense, but it was too far out to even mention to Mike. I pulled out a couple of dollar bills from my wallet and tossed them on the table.
“I’ve got to go,” was all I said, moving quickly toward the door but not rushing enough to attract Lorraine or Mike’s attention.
There was no way I was going to try to explain that this ‘swamp pussy,’ as my neighbor called Bozo, had come to get me. It was just too bizarre for almost anyone to consider, and even a bit hard for me to internalize.
I drove the Volks back to the apartment. Coming down Cabrillo I knew immediately that there might be a problem. A compound Lincoln staff car, one of the ‘real’ limo versions, was sitting across the street from my driveway. I pulled in, shut the Volks down, and then climbed the stairs to get inside. Mary was waiting for me, and I realized immediately why Bozo had gone to the trouble he obviously had, although how he could possibly have known that I was inside Galloways would probably be a mystery for the rest of my life. My wife was emotionally upset, which meant that Julie, sitting on the couch clutching Mrs. Beasley, was upset with her.
“What’s going on?” I asked, taking a deep breath. Mary was pretty hard to upset so my expectation of what was causing it wasn’t good.
“They came to the door, two of them, and they said you’d be gone for a few days,” she said, her voice flat and unemotional, as she got control of herself.
“They made me pack a suitcase for you and then took it out to that car. They’ve never acted like that before, just telling me what to do.”
“I understand, but let’s find out what’s going on first,” I replied as calmly as I could. I was as uncomfortable as my wife but additionally, I couldn’t afford to be gone for days at all, not at the critical juncture involving the ‘missing’ Porsche.
“What did you pack?” I asked, wondering what she’d have thrown together in such short order under extreme duress.
“Some shirts, sox, and stuff,” she replied, making no effort to go into detail.
Somehow I knew I’d probably not find my Dopp kit inside the suitcase, and certainly not my Colt 45. It was rumored that metal detectors were required for boarding aircraft in New Orleans and that this practice would spread, but so far nothing had come of it, at least not in traveling aboard Huges Air West out of either National in D.C. or at the Orange County International Airport I would be flying from. At the stage things had reached in my participation with the Western White House and the mess that was rapidly developing with the president, I wasn’t about to travel anywhere without the .45, or maybe even the .44 Magnum.
“I’ll be back,” I said and went out through the door.
When I got outside I went down the stairs and directly approached the driver’s door of the waiting limo.
The window went down.
“I’m taking my personal vehicle, as I’m presuming we’re headed for the compound,” I said, hoping they’d allow that and not wait for an answer.
Nothing was said to my back as I crossed Cabrillo and got into the Volks, glad I’d left the keys in the ignition. I didn’t bother to follow the limo, instead pulling out and heading to South Ola Vista, thinking about the fact that I was upset enough about what might be waiting inside my apartment that I’d completely forgotten about the car keys.
I beat the guys in the limo to the gate, parked, and went inside, nodding to the Marines who’d saluted me on the way in. I might be nobody, I thought, but I was somebody to the Marine Corps, which was enough. The Corps was apparently giving me a big decoration, which was a lot more than I was getting from the members of the Western White House.
I walked inside without any opposition from the Secret Service located just inside the big double doors. I made it all the way past the door leading over to the residence, and breathed a sigh of relief, until coming to the end of the hall and standing to look at Haldeman’s and Ehrlichman’s desks. Nobody was at them. I turned my head to the left. The men were sitting where I’d met with them twice before. Neither meeting had gone that well, and here I was again, although there was a third man, sitting next to Haldeman on the couch. Haldeman and Ehrlichman were deep in conversation, although I didn’t fail to catch Haldeman’s raised pinky on his right hand as he sipped what I presumed was coffee. Mardian stood up and headed straight for me, while the agent who’d accompanied me literally backed his way into the hall again before turning to disappear.
“What?” Mardian said, his voice low, nearly a hiss.
“You want what’s in the Porsche sooner or later, because if I get sent off on some errand boy kind of delivery thing I won’t be back soon enough,” I got out, and when he didn’t respond, I went on, “And I don’t think that package, whatever it is, you probably don’t need to have somebody else, probably a civilian or a member of local law enforcement, find, open and handle.”
“You found it,” Mardian breathed out.
“Indeed,” I replied, noting that neither Haldeman nor Ehrlichman appeared to notice Mardian and I conversing intensively only a few feet away. “However, I don’t have full possession yet. I’m going to need a bit of a budget and at least the two days I’ve been told I’ll be gone.”
I stopped talking and waited, looking out through the distant picture windows running north and south all across the ocean-facing side of the huge long room. The storm surf I’d almost died in only days earlier was still making the beach an uninhabited sandy wasteland, but the raw beauty of it was captivating. I wondered while Mardian got his thoughts together, whether I’d be as excited as I usually was to get back out and body surf in it. I also noted, with some satisfaction, given the few seconds of reverie, that it was evident Mardian, and that also likely meant everyone else in the White House retinue, were unaware that Gularte and I had drowned the Porsche. That only left Cobb and Richard. I smiled to myself. Cobb had been fishing, and I’d almost bitten. There’d been nobody present to witness the sinking, which meant that both Gularte and I had to go to our graves with the truth or pay a price that was so unacceptable that it didn’t deserve any consideration. I worked to hide the relief from my facial expression.
“Forget the ‘errand’ as you call it. I’ll let Cobb know that she’s got to fund your effort. I want the package. I don’t give a tinker’s damn about the Porsche itself.”
“What do you want me to do with it when I finally have it in my possession?” I asked.
A second wave of relief washed over me as I knew for certain that I would be going home instead of off on another strange adventure, one my wife and daughter, much less that battered, weathered but very cogent and feeling cat, needed to be frightened about while I was away. I had no plan if the people I was dealing with, or who were dealing with me, decided that I was getting on a plane. The power that emanated from every individual I faced at the compound, or over at the residence, was overwhelming and directly evident.
“You don’t want to know what’s there, and you can really trust me about that,” Mardian replied, looking over toward Haldeman, as if not wanting to fill him in on the new plan. Whatever was in that Porsche had the full attention of the country’s leadership, possibly aside from the president himself.
How the conversation seemed to shift from recovering the package to my possibly finding out what was inside it was strange to me, but I said nothing and did what I did best with such powerful people. I waited in silence.
“Wait here,” Mardian said, walking over to where Haldeman and Ehrlichman sat.
He leaned forward and whispered. I couldn’t make out what was said but had a good idea it was about me and the recovery of the package. Mardian straightened up but didn’t retreat, only turning his head to glance at me briefly, his expression one of surprise. A pang of fear went through me. What did these men have up their sleeves now, I wondered, once again looking out upon the ocean waves for a sense of calm and well-being, no matter how storm-tossed those waters were.
Mardian came back to where I stood.
“Come with me,” was all he said before walking into the hall, headed either for the door to the residence or the double doors at the end.
No Secret Service agents did anything but stand in place, their backs to the hallway walls. As was their habit, they also avoided all eye contact.
Mardian walked to the doors, one of which was opened before us. Once outside the man looked around briefly before heading for my parked Volkswagen.
“Unlocked?” he asked.
“Yes, sir,” I replied, in surprise, the fact that the Volkswagen’s windows were down obviously indicated it was unlocked seeming to have escaped the man who normally seemed very sensitive to everything around him.
Mardian climbed into the passenger seat.
“These things were built for pygmies,” he commented, struggling to get his large, long body inside the vehicle.
“Where’s the Porsche?” he asked, and I instantly knew there was no point in lying to him, not if I was going to have any credibility left.
“At the bottom of the ramp in Dana Point Harbor,” I said, truthfully, trying to allow no expression in my voice to seep through, although the amount of fear I was feeling couldn’t be reduced, only accommodated.
“That was brilliant,” he replied, turning his head to look out the front window at the front gate where the Marines milled about making believe we weren’t there in front of them.
I tried to figure out what the man was talking about. He was serious. Very serious. Like I’d figured some things out that I had no clue about and then acted upon my knowledge and feelings. Once again, I said nothing.
After a few seconds, Mardian began to speak again, this time his tone one of analytical instruction.
“Nobody can hear this,” he finally said, turning his head to face me, his expression deadly serious, his eyes unblinking. “You’re still active duty, or as active duty as special operations can make you, in the Marines. I’ll call General Dwyer’s Chief of Staff and let him know you need to make a withdrawal from the base armory located near the shooting range. We don’t want that package back and nobody else can ever find it. You can’t do a dive down to get it and you can’t raise the vehicle in the populated environment of that harbor under intense construction. You’re artillery and you were an outstanding student at Fort Sill, not to mention a genius at implementing that training over in the ridiculously deadly valley.”
Mardian stopped talking and waited, reaching into the breast pocket of his suit coat to take out a cigar. “Does this German piece of crap have a lighter?”
“On the dash to your left just under that center black knob, which is for the ashtray,” I replied, pointing.
Mardian lit his cigar, the smoke from which would be hard to explain to my wife, as her father smoked cigars and she hated the aroma. He puffed but still said nothing. I finally realized that, for some reason, he was waiting for me to talk.
“Blow it in place,” I said, finally, “but with a slow-burning explosive so the effects in one atmosphere of water pressure won’t really reach the surface in a dramatic way. I’ll need about a quarter-pound block or stick of TNT, as Tetral, Composition B, and C-4 are too fast. Not much TNT is held in armories anymore so I might have to go to a civilian supplier. I’ll also need a detonation cord, fuse cord, and an igniter.”
“You appear to be what you are described to be,” Mardian answered, blowing a huge puff of smoke right into the windshield in front of him.
“The armory will have or find whatever you need, of that I’m certain. Figure out an excuse to write down when you withdraw it. Cobb is still hanging around in her yacht, waiting for results on this so get whatever funds you need from her when you see her.”
I wondered what I was ‘described to be’ to Mardian and others in the White House gang, but I left that subject alone.
“How much money should I ask her for?” I said, wondering just how much cash this diminutive penetrating female kept with her at all times, “and is the package in the frunk as I expect?”
“The package is locked in the trunk and use your own judgment for funding, but be aware that none of the money stuff escapes the attention of those
paying close attention to such things.”
With that, Mardian extricated himself from the Volks and walked back toward the compound doors without saying anything or looking back.
I sat in the parking lot thinking. The dive was back on, not like the original plan for recovery I’d conceived, but for one of placement. The explosive device would have to be set under the car below the frunk, in order to use the vehicle’s heavy body as a shield from allowing a thrusting shaft of water to be sent to the surface. TNT exploded at a speed of right around seven thousand feet per second which was still pretty high, but keeping the amount down, and the device would have a directed charge shape. It was doable, but how to place and then detonate it was still going to be a real problem, not to mention a follow-up dive to make sure the mission was accomplished.
I drove out of the lot and headed to Gularte’s place. His love of such missions, hopefully, hadn’t cooled. Bob Elwell was a SCUBA-qualified diver and his presence might be needed, but Bob wasn’t yet fully cleared for the kind of lifetime confidence such a mission would certainly require. No, I had to go to Richard and hope he was qualified, and if he was, which wouldn’t surprise me in the least, then secure his cooperation. I didn’t personally trust him but if he was a ‘player’ in the complex game we were all playing, like the Staff Sergeant, then his ability to keep such a secret would have to be accommodated if never fully trusted to remain secure.
I walked into Gularte’s nightmare idea of a bachelor pad, with a pool table set in the center of its tiny living room. Two chairs, a couch, a television, and one small table made up the furnishings he lived in when he wasn’t using the bathroom or sleeping. He didn’t cook at all.
I stepped inside and started right out, as he stared, half-dressed and surprised at my early arrival.
“We’re going to the base, so you’ll have to get into costume,” I said, remembering that I had to call my wife and let her know I’d be wearing my Marine uniform once again. Gularte could go as a cop.
“Just what I was going to tell you,” Gularte said. “The guys in 2/13, the unit Young is in, are having you for lunch today. They are celebrating your rescue of one of their Marines so we can’t miss it.”
“Having me for lunch doesn’t sound all that appealing,” I replied, holding back about the coming mission and our need to acquire the necessary demolition devices to make it all possible. Not that the party wouldn’t be a good reason for going to the base in the first place, although I couldn’t imagine that anyone might be watching or really caring about what we might be doing, at least not until the mission was over.
“How shall you ever get out?”
I understand the primal fear the cat felt from your wife’s reaction to the visitors, and to come seek you out. I also understand why the cats presence caused you to react. I have to hand it to you that you had the self control not to drag the messenger out of the car and provide some “direction” on how to interact with your family. I don’t know that many could have held the restraint you did in the circumstances. The A Shau valley must have delivered lessons well beyond your years at the time. One cannot make effective decisions without information, restraint gave you a far more tenable position than push back would have. Another ride along that razors edge!, holding back from the knee jerk actions. BZ again, another punji stake evaded, an emotional responce would have placed you at the top of the suspect list.
“If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense. Nothing would be what it is, because everything would be what it isn’t. And contrary wise, what is, it wouldn’t be. And what it wouldn’t be, it would. You see?”
“Curiouser and curiouser !”
What a great and intelligent comment to make on this chapter. I am surprised and delighted to
read and reread your work and your message. Thanks ever so much for the many compliments worked into
your comment about my own stuff. Much appreciated.
Semper fi,
Jim
A great chapter sir. Thank you again.
I’ve never had reason to consider the differences in explosive compounds. Like most laymen, I just considered a BOOM sufficient. You have piqued my interest and I will endeavour to educate myself a bit.
Tim
Anfo is what the mixture of special high concentrate fertilizer with diesel fuel, in the proper mixture, only explodes at about ten to thirteen thousand feet per second. A very ‘slow’ explosion. As soon as a student of EOD comes to know that then the truck load of Anfo used in the Oklahoma explosion no longer makes sense. The building never could have been that damaged at that distance from the truck by Anfo. That was C-4 or Comp B, so where did those supposed hick clowns come by that kind of very well guarded and accounted for stuff? Hmmmm.
Thanks for the inquiring and interesting comment.
Semper fi,
Jim
When the powers that be decide to cancel your unexpected to you roadtrip , to make whatever is in the frunk of Little Mardians car go away forever it must be of some extreme importance . Explosives no matter what kind even under those conditions will attract unwanted attention , so how do your superiors think they can cover that up ? Egos of men who believe that they have the power to do anything they want and get away with it under any circumstances often lose sight of the fact that there are others who will not look the other way . Such has been the downfall of many “Great Men and Empires” has it not ?
THE CHUCK BOLAM JR.! Much uncertainty begins to raise its ugly head as the Nixon period of presidency ever so
slowly comes to a screeching halt.
Men and women get into positions of great power and then fall victim to their yes people and those who gain from their actions…
but almost never share much when the whole thing comes apart.
Thanks for the great comment, as usual!
Semper fi, my friend,
Jim
Wow Lt. you sure have a talent for getting out of a tight spot. Another great read.
Thanks ever so much Wes, much appreciate the compliment!
Semper fi,
Jim
Another barn burner LT, you just keep them coming! A few minor suggestions:
I frowned by (but) didn’t make any comment.
…his gaze directed out toward Mae Avenue, which not (no)traffic at the early hour…
Some shirts, sox and stuff she replied, making no effort (to) go into detail
What do you want me to do with it when I finally have it in my possession (I) asked, a second wave of…
Thanks again Jim
Thanks for the editing help Joe, and the compliment, of course!
Semper fi,
Jim
Hey Jim this is great, keeps me thinking about it all week, quite complicated to follow and gets more complicated with each installment but I luv it. Keep the stories coming Sir.
Thankyou Ron, it is always interesting and gratifying to get such informed feedback from dedicated reared like you.
Cannot thank you enough.
Semper fi,
Jim
Another amazing chapter in a LONG series of amazing chapters. Thanks you so much for sharing this James.
I much enjoy just hww much you much enjoy Chuck! You are a class act up there in the Green Bay area.
I am a part of the great shine project up there so I’ll be up one day this summer for a board meeting.
Thanks for your great support and friendship.
Semoer fi,
Jim
This was a great chapter because it is a “stage setter”. What happens now ? with Richard, how do you blow up the frunk, Cobb?? and what did the Whitehouse want you to do?
Enquiring minds want to know. Remember that?
I love it when an author teases us with so many unanswered questions. So get to work and write more chapters.
I am hard at work on the next chapter this very night, although taking a break to answer some much demanding comments.
Thanks for your continued interest and support…and the writing of you wandering mind and high intellect….
Semper fi,
Jim
I forgot to add the title of ‘friend’ when I signed off on your comment so here it is…
Semper fi, my friend,
Jim
Funny, I had never thought of the EOD aspects of an 08 specialty! Also I wonder if the Western Whitehouse wasn’t a focus of all this “ special ops” intrigue because it was so far out of DC (FBI, Media, Agency, etc.) view or understanding!
Colonel, at the time, you are exactly correct. The Western White House of the time was completely ignored by the media
and most everyone else not invited as well. Nobody tracked who went in or out to my knowledge. That can be the hotbed for the creation and execution of
rather subversive activity…aka what I and Mardian and more were up to!\
Semper fi, my great friend,
Jim
James, That Porsche is going to be a mess when they finally retrieve it!
Security through obscurity didn’t work this time.
Bozo earned a reward today. Maybe some fresh fish.
Good chance the Polaroid that took the pic of you getting iced was provided by the compound for an earlier mission. I’m assuming your wife took the picture.
Is the detail of you retrieving your suitcase from the limo worth mentioning?
I felt my stomach tightening during the Mardian conversation. Back to 30 Days.
So far, so good. Keep them coming.
Some minor editing suggestions follow:
There were things I needed to talk to Gularte about things I didn’t want anyone else to hear
Two instances of “things” Drop one after “about”
There were things I needed to talk to Gularte about I didn’t want anyone else to hear
Del Mar Avenue, which had not traffic at the early hour
“no” instead of “not”
Del Mar Avenue, which had no traffic at the early hour
The SCUBA idea had been a bit hair-brained
“hare-brained”
The SCUBA idea had been a bit hare-brained
“The last farewell,”
Since this is a song title – should it be capitalized?
“The Last Farewell,”
“Whittaker,” I think that guy called
Maybe add “is” after “guy”
“Whittaker,” I think that guy is called
dawn was in full evidence as the horizon dimmed light that would shine brightly
Maybe reword
dawn was in full evidence at the horizon with dimmed light that would shine brightly
We can likely include Dutch throwing in with us
“Butch” instead of “Dutch”
We can likely include Butch throwing in with us
he said, rising to his feet. What do we do now?”
Open quotes before “What”
he said, rising to his feet. “What do we do now?”
“How do you think that way?
Close quotes
“How do you think that way?”
“How’s it going, Jimmy,” Mike said
Maybe question mark
“How’s it going, Jimmy?” Mike said
I frowned by didn’t make any comment.
Maybe “but” instead of “by”
I frowned but didn’t make any comment.
Gularte’s was a good Marine, but back in the real world
“Gularte”
Gularte was a good Marine, but back in the real world
I’d somehow plunged my neck deep into
Maybe change word order
I’d somehow plunged into neck deep
but also in my A Shau driven in understanding just how flawed
Two instances of “in” Maybe drop second after “driven”
but also in my A Shau driven understanding just how flawed
The medal was great to get
/Context seems this is day after the rescue. At this point you would not even know you had been recommended for a medal. My guess it will take several weeks before the medal is awarded. Maybe reword./
The rescue was uplifting in so many ways, as it helped reinforce the fact
What’s that strangely ugly cat
Backspace to align text with quote marks
the cat was gone, his turn and rush down the sidewalk
Maybe reword to
the cat was gone, he turned and rushed down the sidewalk
I was going to try to try to explain that this ‘swamp pussy,’
Two instances of “to try” Drop one
I was going to try to explain that this ‘swamp pussy,’
she replied, making no effort to into detail
Maybe add “go” before “into”
she replied, making no effort to go into detail
been nobody present or witnessing the sinking
Maybe change “or” to “to”
change “witnessing” to “witness”
been nobody present to witness the sinking
finally have it in my possession?” asked
Add “I” before “asked”
finally have it in my possession?” I asked
No Secret Service agents did anything but stand around, their backs to the hallway walls.
Maybe “in place” rather than “around”
No Secret Service agents did anything but stand in place, their backs to the hallway walls.
As we their habit, they also avoided all eye contact
“was” instead of “we”
As was their habit, they also avoided all eye contact
Mardian walked at the doors
“to” instead of “at”
Mardian walked to the doors
Your artillery and you were an outstanding student
“You’re” instead of “your”
You’re artillery and you were an outstanding student
the White House gang, but I let that subject alone
Maybe “left” instead of “let”
the White House gang, but I left that subject alone
escapes the attention of those
Paying close attention
Lower case for “paying”
backspace to join sentence fragments
escapes the attention of those paying close attention
“Having me for lunch doesn’t sound all that appealing,
Close quotes
“Having me for lunch doesn’t sound all that appealing,”
need to acquire the necessary pyrotechnics
Maybe “demolition devices” instead of “pyrotechnics”
need to acquire the necessary demolition devices
Blessings & Be Well
Thanks so much for the comprehensive edit and also your comments prior to laying into the work.
Without you the site would be a bit of a mess when I came to telling the story in any way that’s understandable.
Semper fi, my friend,
Jim
Dang, Lt! Good chapter. Questions in my mind again, which I’m sure you will sooner than later answer. Why would Mardian hide something of vital interest to the powers behind the administration, in the trunk of his wild son’s car? Lots of risk there. On the demo dive I would probably be carrying a pry bar to see what was in the package. I’m just that curious about the larcenous minds of others and the pry marks would probably be hidden by the explosion. Gularte is the kind of NCO that any combat leader would want in his platoon. You were very lucky there. And, you have got a great wife to put up with the life you were leading.
My wife actually has never considered herself as a partner ‘putting up’ with much of anything. She’s always considered herself along for the ride and the adventure, given that hers isn’t an expressive personality like my own . She did go on to run the Georgia OKeeffe Museum in Santa Fe and then the Chicago Botanic as well. So, her own capabilities are pretty extensive, not to mention education and life experience. Sometimes, when really powerful people say something like ‘you don’t want to know,’ they are actually trying to help you. There are things that we can all put inside our minds that we can’t get out once they are embedded. I have enough of those….but the real story plays on and out and total rationality wasn’t a great part of that.
Semper fi,
Jim
Great story on the analysis of the explosives. I can hardly wait for next one. Mike’s observation of Gularte’s lack of sophistication is one of the reminders of my days in the Army and the social distinction between the officer and enlisted corps. One day with just me and a captain in the office, I addressed him with his last name. He made me stand at attention, and look at his bars, as he explained the difference to me, just the two of us. He was a RIF asshole anyway. Or the time I had to take a newly minted OCS gold bar with me as I did my work. Of course he was sitting in the back of the jeep when he said “Home James!” The real kicker many years later we were having to scrape up tile in the social hall at church on a Saturday morning. The associate pastor, a retired major, as were working away said “Where are the privates?” He was working as hard as me, but he had no idea how degrading that was to me, a draftee after all. I actually had several officers I was friends with. They were not much different from me.
Kemp
The average I.Q. is 100 and that means half the people you meet on any given day, not in graduate or medical school and such, have less than that to work with. When I was teaching college I was stunned by how many professor around me didn’t seem to be in that above one hundred crowd and, of course, I found the same to be true among officers in the military. Many get into college, which is a big part of becoming an officer, by their contacts and family, and not by merit…and many of them graduate for the same reasons. You are an extremely bright guy, which means that you have wandered through life in pretty lonely circumstance, like a lot of others…and titles seldom have much to do with it.
Semper fi, my friend,
Jim
Mr. Strauss, Sir.
Is it possible that your writing skills are improving with each and every installment (I kind of think maybe yes.)? Or maybe I’m simply getting sucked deeper and deeper into the story and find myself sweating as I read it. Thank you for sharing – I so look forward to each installment. At this time, I have to wonder why, though. Why would someone in position of authority over “the package” have allowed Young Mardian to be in possession of it in the first place? It sounds to me like he might have been known to be a bit of a loose cannon, so to speak, and not especially trustworthy with such a secret. Thanks again.
Unless Little Mardian didn’t know the package was there at all.How you will find the following chapters interesting in revealing more
about what really happened, which I don’t think I could make up to be nearly as interesting as what took place. Thanks for the deep analysis and your opinions. I think the other readers are as appreciative as I am for you efforts here.
Semper fi,
Jim
You get deeper and deeper, Jim, but are nowhere near the bottom of the Mariana’s Trench – yet! And having learned a little bit about you along the way, I won’t be surprised (well, maybe a little bit) to find you have somehow exceeded that depth.
Better think up a way now about how to explain to your wife just how you managed to perforate both eardrums!
As usual, write faster! Or I’m gonna have to learn to slow my reading down.
My friend Wilcox…thanks so much for your encouragement, although you may not have written your most excellent comment to be exactly that.
I do read these comments intently and they effect me quite deeply…two of the reasons that I answer them all personally. Thanks for the Mariana Trench
comparison…as I, indeed, felt I was pretty far underwater at the time. I write on into this day and have more motivation from people like you.
Semper fi,
Jim
Deeper and deeper James,m how are you still here? da
Survival in those days wasn’t something I really thought about simply because the terror I’d gone through down in the valley sort of deadened me to
some exposure to deep-seated fear…or made me care less…I’m not certain. Maybe there was also some ‘addiction’ to being close to being afraid but tap-dancing away just in time when real disaster was right at hand. I don’t know. Thanks for the great short but meaningful comment.
Semper fi,
Jim
This is beginning to sound like Mission Impossible!! Only difference is you where not told to burn the message, just blow up a car, under water, in a marina…..No one will notice that at all….. Keep em coming Lt, thank you sir!
Yes, there was that problem, and just a few others, in being given such an offhand but deeply troubling mission. I must
admit, however, I did love working once again with pyrotechnics, even if it wasn’t of the artillery kind.
Semper fi,
Jim
So a thank you party by the 2/13 unit would be a good reason to hit the base and then detour to get some blow-up goodies !! A plan is falling into place whereby all will be right in the world ….. or not !!
Great read James, keep ’em coming !!
Semper Fi
Coincidences are strange bits of the universe coming together that seemingly have little to do with one another, but then we humans don’t have the kind of understanding of what’s going on (or what it is) in the universe. Thanks for the comment and for you thinking about what’s going on at the time.
Semper fi,
Jim
I am desperate to cancel a recent order…wrong item through pay pal
The order was canceled and the money repaid through PayPal, as you instructed.
Thanks for the order and sorry you went for the wrong book.
Semper fi,
Jim
Bravo!
Apparently, you do not like surprises or the opportunity to take a “trip” about which you know nothing.
More twists and turns than a bowl full of spaghetti.
One typo?
“…We can likely include Dutch throwing in with us. My job alone is to make sure about Richard and Cobb.”
Dutch = Butch?
The trip would have been another adventure and I would have liked to make it, but there was no way I could simply drop everything else at that point and disappear…not without the possibility of losing everything. Thanks for the editing help, as well.
Semper fi,
Jim
Hare-brained as in the size of a rabbit brain.
Good read again.
Thanks, Sir
Chris
Yes, an accurate statement in your comment Christopher. I tend to think of the width of a human hair instead of the true root of the comment.
Thanks for that observation here.
Semper fi,
Jim
Wow great chapter
Thanks, Robert, for a short but great compliment.
Semper fi,
Jim