When Althesis and his men were gone, Tinda departed. The cat came to its feet as he left. Both Cetan and the boy nervously watched, as the cat followed the departing sub-chief for a few man lengths before turning to look back at them. Hasti’s head swung slowly back and forth, between Tinda and Cetan and the boy, as if he was making up his mind. Without making any more seemingly aggressive moves, the cat returned to lay down next to the women and children where it appeared to fall back into a deep sleep.
“What do you make of that?” the boy asked the older warrior. “And you are now chief of this tribe. That’s got a great sound to it Chief.”
Love it!
Is this the end?
Walter. It is the end of Book One.
Book Two is being written and will discuss the winter as the Pride becomes more evolved.
Thank you for your support
Yes great new’s, get well quick.
Get Well LT. Love your work.
I need to go back to where I left off some time ago to catch up with the chapters I missed, but it is an intriguing story. Jim, get well soon. I’ll be praying for swift and complete recovery.
Thank you, Diane.
Great news on Jim, thanks Chuck
Though I don’t really get what the story is about as I didn’t read it from the very beginning, but I guess you’ve got an amazing piece here. I wish I’m also dedicated to my novel- writing a whole chapter in just one night.
You can start this book here and click at the bottom of each Chapter to go forward.
The Cat, Beginning
Thanks Jim get well quick
Been waiting on this. You are a very good writer. Praying for a swift recovery for you.
Thanks, Billy.
Slower rebound than anticipated.
Jim
Love this story thank you!
This story drew me in from the beginning. Love it!
Thanks again, Arnie for all of your support.
Slowly getting back to the keyboard.
Semper fi,
Jim
If there were any spies watching this action should seal the deal on any doubters.
I am just getting fully ambulatory after the bypass surgery. Sitting at the computer fully erect is still demanding but I am getting stronger day by day. Wednesday of this week (Feb 5) will make it two weeks.
Thanks for the comment and I’ll be fully answering all my comments again soon and also finishing the Third Ten Days. My heart surgery was a success but the recovery will be a bit longer than I
anticipated.
If you want to help you can buy my books (there are now seven available) either online or if you want autographed and signed/inscribed from my website here. If you can and want to help with the coming
jamboree this year and tour then you can contribute at https://www.gofundme.com/f/thirty-days-has-september. I will much appreciate whatever attention you pay to me and my work.
Semper fi, and I cannot thank you enough.
Jim
Jim, Hoping you are relaxing after the surgery. And now you have me staring at the raft, with Hasti sitting in the prow, like a figurehead of a not to distant sailing ship – With the raft performing a similar function for all like the greatest of sailing ships. Taking them to a new place, a better place with the hope of a better future – With no guarantees.
I am just getting fully ambulatory after the bypass surgery. Sitting at the computer fully erect is still demanding but I am getting stronger day by day. Wednesday of this week (Feb 5) will make it two weeks.
Thanks for the comment and I’ll be fully answering all my comments again soon and also finishing the Third Ten Days. My heart surgery was a success but the recovery will be a bit longer than I
anticipated.
If you want to help you can buy my books (there are now seven available) either online or if you want autographed and signed/inscribed from my website here. If you can and want to help with the coming
jamboree this year and tour then you can contribute at https://www.gofundme.com/f/thirty-days-has-september. I will much appreciate whatever attention you pay to me and my work.
Semper fi, and I cannot thank you enough.
Jim