Guantanamera
Short Story by James Strauss
The winds off of Lake Eerie blew cold and hard through the streets of downtown Buffalo. New York was cold and damp in winter, although Arch Patton had never been apprised of that kind of weather occurring in the great state. New York was all about the city, in almost all the literature he’d ever read or even in the college experience he had in the Midwest. Arch had no coat. He’d come in by bus to get the job his Coast Guard Marine Inspector Dad had arranged for him to have. He was to ship out that evening aboard the Daniel J. Morrell, one of the ore boats that plied the waters of the great lakes, going constantly back and forth between Lackawanna, New York and Taconite, Minnesota. The freight was iron taconite pellets and Arch’s billet was as a common seaman or deckhand.
The bus had come in at about three, so he’d decided to walk into the downtown area of Buffalo, which had proven to be a bit of a mistake. Almost nothing was open in the afternoon because of the blustery conditions and the onset of winter to the area. He found a clothing store open and went inside, more to warm up than to buy anything. The clothing all looked too expensive for Arch’s poor small budget. He slowly warmed up by walking through the racks of suits and other male attire. The place was clean and all the material made it smell wonderful. The only other man in the place turned out to be Bill. Bill said he was the owner and wanted to know what Arch might want of his stock.
Arch didn’t know what to say so he came up with what was on his mind.
“A coat,” he said. “It’s cold and I’ve got to set sail later this evening.”
“Ah, a sailor,” Bill replied, with a big smile. “You don’t look like a sailor. You look like a college kid.”
“I was that, but now I’m a sailor, I guess because my dad got them this job with the ore boat people.” Arch made the reply uncomfortably, wondering what a college kid really looked like and why he fit that description.
“What do you have?” Bill asked, causing Arch to do a bit of a double-take.
“What do you mean?” Arch said.
“Money,” Bill replied. “You have to have a budget of some sort. You’ve got to go aboard a ship and probably, from the age and looks of you, you’ll be working outside on the deck in this weather. The shipping companies do not provide clothing. I notice you have decent boots and that’s a great start, but now you need a coat a hat and some gloves.”
Arch reached back to get his wallet out but he did it very slowly. He knew what he had. He had twenty-five dollars because that is how much he’d gotten from cashing in his only savings bond he’d received as a kid.
“Twenty dollars,” Arch said, shoving his wallet back into his pocket without taking it out.
“Okay, we’ve got a twenty-dollar budget,” the man said. “I can work with that.”
Bill did not go to any of the racks, instead, he moved to the back of the room and headed through some drapes into a back room.
Arch barely heard him yell back “I’ll turn on the music, some of that stuff you kids love.”
Arch wondered if coming into the store had been a mistake. He should have simply hiked the three miles to the Lackawanna terminal and gotten on his ship. He’d asked dad what he might need to be a seaman but his dad had simply said that figuring that out was part of becoming a man and a man of the sea.
The music began to play. The song was Guantanamera by the Sandpipers. Arch had heard it before, but not alone sitting inside a men’s clothing store as the evening of winter in Buffalo came on. The poignant nature of the song’s lyrics struck him. He knew the history of the poor poet who’d been hounded out of Cuba and when he’d gone back after the revolution they’d killed him. He listened through the whole song with his eyes closed, sitting in a stuffed chair waiting for Bill.
Bill came out carrying a blue coat over his shoulder, with a set of gloves in one hand and a wool seaman’s hat in the other.
“The coat’s a bit large but it should do, leftover from last winter when it was really cold,” Bill said, holding out a big dark blue Pea Coat in both hands.
The song playing in the background ended and he gave Bill twenty dollars for the stuff he needed so badly but had not really understood what he would need.
Arch served as a deckhand on the Morrell for several months, getting off to return to St. Norbert College a few days before the ship made its last run of the season down through Lake Huron. The ship never made it, breaking up and going down with all hands, save one, in an early winter storm.
Over the ensuing fifty-two years, Arch settled in Lake Geneva, Wisconsin and began work publishing a local newspaper.
One day he walked into his favorite men’s store called Haberdapper, a high-end men’s clothing store. As he sat and talked to the wonderful man who owned the store, the song in the background, playing over the store ceiling speakers was Guantanamera, by the Sandpipers and Arch remembered all the way back, as he did every time he heard the song through the ensuing years. Steve excused himself and went into his storeroom, saying that he had something for Arch. Arch sat waiting, and thinking about a couple of the memorable shipmates he’d sailed with on the Daniel J. Morrell until Steve came back. Without preamble, he walked around the counter and held out a coat. It was a blue Pea Coat. He said it was a size too large but might work for Arch.
The song played out in the brief stop in time as Arch stood and was stunned.
“I’ll take it,” he said to Steve, without trying the coat on.
“No, you better try it on,” Steve replied.
“No,” Arch replied, “It’ll do.”
Arch stepped out of the storefront and walked toward his car, holding the coat he’d worn in under his arm. He wore the over-large Pea Coat as he had done fifty-two years before. In the first stanza of the translated Spanish poem he’d committed to memory as time had gone by and he’d heard the tune occasionally played on the radio:
“With the poor people of this earth, I want to share my lot.
The little streams of the mountains please me more than the sea.”
Arch got into his vehicle and sat still. He slowly stroked the rough but fine wool of the coat’s left sleeve. He didn’t start the car. He tried to put together the significance of the events that had transpired fifty-two years earlier and then only a few minutes in the past, but he could not. Bill, so many years earlier had basically given the needed sailor’s attire to Arch when he’d needed them most, and then Steve had discounted the overly-large coat to almost the same extent. What were the chances of that happening, and then the song, that song, playing along at the same time, as if shepherding Arch along toward some goal unknown to him?
Arch leaned forward and touched his forehead to the top of this car’s steering wheel and then closed his eyes. Slowly, he whispered the first words of the song stanza he had memorized through the years.
Jim, I’ve been following ‘30 Days’ since you started, great read, thanks for putting this together. I was in the Blue Water Navy off Nam up and down the gun-line in ‘71. After the Navy I sailed on the Great Lakes for 36 years. My last ship was the SS Badger and Dennis Hale made a trip with us and I had the honor of sitting down with him for an hour and hearing all about his life on the Morrell in great detail. Was a shame to hear of his passing. Am patiently waiting for the next chapter of ‘30 Days’……
I never got back to see Dennis, which is a shame. He was my deck watch when I was promoted from
deck hand to be his assistant at his request. I actually got off the ship earlier than the other
deck hand who died (also a college kid). Assistant to Dennis paid considerably more than deck hand
because of union rules. I made double the money but then got cut because they could not pay me less.
Instead they let me go early. And hence, here I am.
Semper fi
Jim
That song and pea coats…
Deja Vu all over again.
Thanks for sharing your memories of those elements
Great story, Jamesl and perfect for the season.
Thanks Jessica, and I know that’s a huge compliment from you!!!
Merry Christmas, my dear…
Jim
41 years ago this past October I boarded a towboat running the Mississippi River. I was that college kid, the one the crew called college kid. Great story James.
I’m now a USCG licensed Merchant Marine Officer. and an expert witness in maritime court cases. What a long, strange trip it’s been.
I also worked the tugboats on the Mississippi the year before I got the gig on the ore boat.
It paid great but I spent too much partying with the crew and did not save enough for college
so Dad ended that tour. What.a wonderful run though. There was this bar in New Orleans where
they served a drink called the Hurricane….man oh man…
Semper fi,
Jim
What goes around comes around…Love reading your short stories as I sit here with my first cup of coffee this beautiful Oklahoma morning. It’s great to see you back! Semper Fi,
Chief
Thanks Donald, appreciate the kind words and the encouragement…
Semper fi,
Jim
Interesting reading real fiction like listening to someone who talks in the 3rd person. I miss the “doing” and it causes me to procrastinate and telling…
Great stuff
S/F
Jim Homan. Navigator and Bombardier aboard the A-6 Intruder, weighs in. The ‘doing.’ The ‘fiction’
The ‘third person.’ How can anybody came home and not feel some procrastination. That word, meaning to delay acting on something
that needs to be acted upon. The last two words are easy to understand and the compliment intended is well received. The rest is
typical Homan deep water and needs some paddling about to fully comprehend.
Semper fi, my friend,
Jim
Good tale, James; and how truly bizarre. Life really does throw incomprehensible events our way sometimes. Whenever that happens to me, I just shake my head and think “there’s another one”.
Yes, the ship going down with my shipmates from the summers of work with them was traumatic too. I left college and went into the Corps and then less than two years after the Morrell
went down I was already shot to pieces and trying to stay alive in Japan. I also lost my brother. He was Army. Those few years in the sixties were something else.
Thanks for caring and writing on here.
Semper fi,
Jim
A great Thanksgiving story! Those of us that have much to be thankful, can share a little. To give someone a hand up, so that someone has something to be thankful also.
Thanks Carl, I feel exactly the same way!!!
Semper fi,
Jim
I love your Arch Patton stuff Lt! Kinda interesting how you wove your current gig into his! Good read!
Thanks Bruce, means a lot to me to have some of the audience here branch out into my other writing…Thank you!
Semper fi,
Jim
Funny some of the mysteries life tosses us. Thanks for sharing that.
Thanks Pete. Real life can be so confounding at times…like that experience.
It only took place, the end, a few days back.
Semper fi,
Jim